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#1 2006-10-01 07:06:39

espeon
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need tips on writing...

i need tips on writing. even though im one of the top writers in my year and one of the top in my whole primary school  its still hard. im writing an akatsuki and sakura fan fiction. so i need all the help i can get since writing about akatsuki is espcially hard since i have to write about...
1. a serious but calm and polite person who killed his entire fmily including aunties and uncles and everyone whos an uchiha
2. a guy who looks like a shark andhas a sword named samehada
3.a guy who looks like a girl(in fact i dont even know if hes a boy or a girl lol) and thinks exploding things are art
4.a guy with skin half white and half black and has a venus fly trap as a body(he actually does eat people)
5.a guy called tobi who wears a mask was probably obito in the past and keeps saying... 'tobi is a good boy'
6.sakura haruno is th easiest lol she has a bad temper like me and shes incredibly strong and beauitful(i didnt say i am beautiful but i am strong smile but not as strong as her. she can crack a guys skull with 1 punch)
7.a guy whos a puppet master and even made himself a puppet except for is chest
8.a guy named leader because the author of naruto hasnt told everyone who the leader is lol
9. a gay person named orochimaru

that about describes it. ive made a start but i dont actually know if its good or not


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#2 2006-10-01 07:39:39

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Re: need tips on writing...

this is my story so far hopefully i did the hide tag right

Last edited by espeon (2006-10-01 07:57:28)


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#3 2006-10-01 07:46:11

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Re: need tips on writing...

i swear i didnt copy and paste that. as u can see i accidently missed out some punctuation marks and capitals letters.

edit~i mean i didnt copy and paste it from a website i copied it from notepad where i wrote it. i septn4  hours writing that part

Last edited by espeon (2006-10-01 07:48:07)


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#4 2006-10-01 08:20:49

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Re: need tips on writing...

It's looks OK so far. But do you want tips on grammar or plot?

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#5 2006-10-02 03:04:33

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Re: need tips on writing...

um yes plz anything really except for punctuation marks lol. also do u have some really compliacted words and the meanings.
except for of course pneumonaultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis which is aa lung disease caused by inhaling volcanic ash. whew its a long word!


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#6 2006-10-02 20:22:18

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Re: need tips on writing...

floccinaucinihilipilification

'to estimate something as worthless'

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#7 2006-10-03 03:06:15

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lol thanks lol


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#8 2006-10-03 03:59:51

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Re: need tips on writing...

nought point nine nine nine nine nine nine nine......(recurring)

It's a word if you hyphenate it.

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#9 2006-10-03 04:02:34

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Re: need tips on writing...

thats not very helpful...


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#10 2006-10-06 00:02:06

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Re: need tips on writing...

OK, then...

Consider the nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs, prepositions, conjunctions, interjections and parenthesis' before you post a story.

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#11 2006-10-06 07:09:00

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Re: need tips on writing...

ok. any powerful adjectives or sentances for example trhe fire bud blossomed into full bloom and the flames burst out


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#12 2007-10-25 07:12:23

Hinata Hyuga1
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Re: need tips on writing...

I am a member of this forum but for themoment it won't let me log in. Anyway try writing Sasuhina.

#13 2007-10-26 19:42:02

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Re: need tips on writing...

Devantè wrote:

nought point nine nine nine nine nine nine nine......(recurring)

It's a word if you hyphenate it.

It equals 1 too.

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#14 2007-10-27 01:49:27

Kayla5
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Re: need tips on writing...

I love writing too!

#15 2007-11-09 02:18:37

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Re: need tips on writing...

espeon wrote:

i need tips on writing. even though im one of the top writers in my year and one of the top in my whole primary school

Tips to improve your writing

1. Avoid alliteration. Always.
2. Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
3. Employ the vernacular.
4. Eschew ampersands & abbreviations, etc.
5. Parenthetical remarks (however relevant) are unnecessary.
6. Remember to never split an infinitive.
7. Contractions aren't necessary.
8. Foreign words and phrases are not apropos.
9. One should never generalize.
10. Eliminate quotations. As Ralph Waldo Emerson said, "I hate quotations. Tell me what you know."
11. Comparisons are as bad as cliches.
12. Don't be redundant; don't use more words than necessary; it's highly superfluous.
13. Be more or less specific.
14. Understatement is always best.
15. One-word sentences? Eliminate.
16. Analogies in writing are like feathers on a snake.
17. The passive voice is to be avoided.
18. Go around the barn at high noon to avoid colloquialisms.
19. Even if a mixed metaphor sings, it should be derailed.
20. Who needs rhetorical questions?
21. Exaggeration is a billion times worse than understatement.
22. Don't never use a double negation.
23. capitalize every sentence and remember always end it with point
24. Do not put statements in the negative form.
25. Verbs have to agree with their subjects.
26. Proofread carefully to see if you words out.
27. If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
28. A writer must not shift your point of view.
29. And don't start a sentence with a conjunction. (Remember, too, a preposition is a terrible word to end a sentence with.)
30. Don't overuse exclamation marks!!
31. Place pronouns as close as possible, especially in long sentences, as of 10 or more words, to the irantecedents.
32. Writing carefully, dangling participles must be avoided.
33. If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
34. Take the bull by the hand and avoid mixing metaphors.
35. Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
36. Everyone should be careful to use a singular pronoun with singular nouns in their writing.
37. Always pick on the correct idiom.
38. The adverb always follows the verb.
39. Last but not least, avoid cliches like the plague; They're old hat; seek viable alternatives.


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#16 2008-09-08 05:34:44

sa
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Re: need tips on writing...

i like to writing and,read.

#17 2008-09-14 19:29:06

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Re: need tips on writing...

I luv writing and reading thas y my jobs b-ing a journo big_smile


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