i swear i didnt copy and paste that. as u can see i accidently missed out some punctuation marks and capitals letters.

edit~i mean i didnt copy and paste it from a website i copied it from notepad where i wrote it. i septn4  hours writing that part

Last edited by espeon (2006-10-02 05:48:07)

um yes plz anything really except for punctuation marks lol. also do u have some really compliacted words and the meanings.
except for of course pneumonaultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis which is aa lung disease caused by inhaling volcanic ash. whew its a long word!

lol thanks lol

thats not very helpful...

ok. any powerful adjectives or sentances for example trhe fire bud blossomed into full bloom and the flames burst out

Devantè wrote:

nought point nine nine nine nine nine nine nine......(recurring)

It's a word if you hyphenate it.

It equals 1 too.

espeon wrote:

i need tips on writing. even though im one of the top writers in my year and one of the top in my whole primary school

Tips to improve your writing

1. Avoid alliteration. Always.
2. Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
3. Employ the vernacular.
4. Eschew ampersands & abbreviations, etc.
5. Parenthetical remarks (however relevant) are unnecessary.
6. Remember to never split an infinitive.
7. Contractions aren't necessary.
8. Foreign words and phrases are not apropos.
9. One should never generalize.
10. Eliminate quotations. As Ralph Waldo Emerson said, "I hate quotations. Tell me what you know."
11. Comparisons are as bad as cliches.
12. Don't be redundant; don't use more words than necessary; it's highly superfluous.
13. Be more or less specific.
14. Understatement is always best.
15. One-word sentences? Eliminate.
16. Analogies in writing are like feathers on a snake.
17. The passive voice is to be avoided.
18. Go around the barn at high noon to avoid colloquialisms.
19. Even if a mixed metaphor sings, it should be derailed.
20. Who needs rhetorical questions?
21. Exaggeration is a billion times worse than understatement.
22. Don't never use a double negation.
23. capitalize every sentence and remember always end it with point
24. Do not put statements in the negative form.
25. Verbs have to agree with their subjects.
26. Proofread carefully to see if you words out.
27. If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
28. A writer must not shift your point of view.
29. And don't start a sentence with a conjunction. (Remember, too, a preposition is a terrible word to end a sentence with.)
30. Don't overuse exclamation marks!!
31. Place pronouns as close as possible, especially in long sentences, as of 10 or more words, to the irantecedents.
32. Writing carefully, dangling participles must be avoided.
33. If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
34. Take the bull by the hand and avoid mixing metaphors.
35. Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
36. Everyone should be careful to use a singular pronoun with singular nouns in their writing.
37. Always pick on the correct idiom.
38. The adverb always follows the verb.
39. Last but not least, avoid cliches like the plague; They're old hat; seek viable alternatives.

I luv writing and reading thas y my jobs b-ing a journo